Sunday, July 20, 2025

Book Review: THE HOUSE OF LOST WHISPERS



Title: The House of Lost Whispers

Author: Jenni Keer

Publisher: Boldwood Books

Pages: 378

My GoodReads Rating: ⭐⭐⭐

 

In 1912, thirteen-year-old Olivia Davenport is orphaned when her father, author Jasper Davenport, and mother Selina die on the maiden voyage of the Titanic. Olivia is invited to live with her father’s friend, Sir Hugo Fairchild and his wife Cynthia and their four sons, Clarence, Louis, Howard and Benji, at their lavish home, Merriford Manor.

The new house becomes the setting for Olivia’s overactive imagination, which she uses to deal with her grief, imagining that her parents aren’t dead but that they have lost their memories and will someday find their way to her.

Moving to an unused part of the mansion, Olivia has the initially unsettling experience of being able to hear and converse with a man called Seth who seems to be living on the other side of the wall in her tower bedroom. Both think the other is a ghost or a product of their overwrought imaginations.

Meanwhile, with the war breaking out in Europe, Sir Hugo and Lady Cynthia watch with increasing dismay and sorrow, as one by one, three of their sons go to war and never return.

It’s only after the war that Olivia realizes that Seth lives in another world where her parents are alive. And now she wants to get to that other world. But how can she find a way into his world?

 

 

I liked Olivia, her imagination, her contentment in her solitude, her longing for her parents, her faither, her larger than life outlook, her willingness to stand up for the bullied, Benji. These are the traits that get her in trouble, pushing some of the events forward, particularly in the fate of Seth, the undergardener.

I liked that Olivia wasn’t coy but knew exactly what she wants with regard to her future and the role she wanted to play in it. That she imagines a life for herself that isn’t limited to marriage and keeping house. But the scene in which she pleasures herself and explores her own sexual awakening was unreal and completely out of sync with the reality of an older teenager in the aftermath of World War I.

Among the others, the only one I liked was Lady Cynthia, who had the only developing character arc to speak of. From being standoffish and reserved, she learns to show affection, to get past her hangups. It’s a pity she ceased to play a role in Olivia’s life in the section called After the War.

 

I was a little uncomfortable with the scenes between Olivia, as a child, and Seth, because of the vast age difference between the two. While these scenes are driven by her imagination, there is no explanation for why Seth should turn out to be the one big love of her life.

 

It’s also more than a little strange that Olivia, no stranger to grief after the death of her parents and then the death of her fiancé soon after, should suddenly forget him, and begin to imagine that a guy she really doesn’t know all that well is the one great love of her life. What’s more, she is not even mildly curious about her parents who are alive and well in the other world.

 

The novel suffers because it tries to become too many things at once. Until the 23 percent mark, nothing happens. When things start happening, the novel starts shifting from one genre to another.

 

In the first part, Before the War, we get a hint of magical realism. This part of the novel is more than a little bulky. While the boys are away, and Olivia is basically entertaining herself, these scenes and chapters were boring and ordinary. Nothing of any significance happens during this period.

 

In Part II, During the War, we get historical fiction, and even war fiction, of sorts. This was the part I liked the most. The author brings out well the sense of bravado and adventure with which young men went out to the battlefront, unaware of the horrors that awaited them. The victorious nations found themselves just as broken as those they had defeated.

Through Clarence, the author gives us her views on the utter futility of war. Clarence says, “As a species, why are we so destructive?”

His mother tells him, “Poetry won’t sustain you in the trenches,” when poetry is sometimes the only thing that has the power to get us through the dark times.

 

In Part III, After the War, the brief hint of magical realism returns, then gives way to romance and a bit of a mystery, when Olivia tries to uncover why Seth’s old love suddenly disappeared.

 

This is where the problem arises, with the book trying to be several books at once. The back-of-the-book synopsis gives us a sense of this being a time-slip, parallel world issue, but in time, the romance between Olivia and two other characters takes precedence. I was disappointed by this turn.

 

Also, the parallel world bit doesn’t show up until quite deep into the book, when we have almost despaired of even seeing it. The explanation of how the parallel world came into being was interesting, but then it was sidelined and the story ended up being just another historical romance.

 

The idea of another world being created out of nothing, a world in which the Titanic did not crash, unleashing a whole different set of possibilities and history, was interesting, but wasn’t explored on a larger scale. All we are left with is a world in which Olivia’s parents did not die, but the World War still took place.

 

It would have been better if the author had found some way of getting Olivia to the other world where her parents lived. Instead, we get a muffling of the parallel world in favour of making do with the current one.

 

I also disagree with the notion that Olivia and Seth are the same in both worlds. A person’s nature and character are heavily influenced by their experiences. An Olivia that had not known grief and sorrow would grow up to be very different from one that had. It would have been better if the book had ended without the forced and rushed happy ending.

 

(I read this book on NetGalley. Thank you to the author, the publisher and NetGalley.) 

Thursday, July 10, 2025

Book Review: BROKEN GIRL: A TRUE STORY



Title: Broken Girl

Author: Caroline Laner Breure and Bradley Trevor Greive

Publisher: Hachette Publishing

Pages: 346

My GoodReads Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐


This is a very touching book co-written by Caroline Laner Breure and Bradley Trevor Greive, based on Caroline’s own tragic yet ultimately uplifting story. Caroline woke up from a coma induced by Traumatic Brain Injury, with large parts of her memory missing. Broken Girl is the story of her joyful life before her tragic accident, how it seemed to unravel in the aftermath, and how she got back her memories and put her broken life together after betrayal and grave illness. 

Born in Campo Grande, in Brazil, Caroline moved to Porto Alegre for her higher education. A graduate of civil engineering and business management, she moved to Sydney in Australia, in the hope of a better life. Along the way, she started her own business, making and selling cruelty-free shoes—Brand No Saints. 

In Sydney, she met Byron, an immigrant to Australia from South Africa. A romance blossomed between the two, with Caroline eventually moving in with Byron. Her new life with Byron was a heady one, with Caroline not only being befriended by Byron’s friends, but also getting swept along on a new lifestyle, travelling to foreign countries, and holidaying abroad. 

On one such trip to Portugal and Span, Byron and Caroline met her mother Jucelia and stepfather Qelbes in Lisbon, where Byron admitted to wanting to marry her and start a family together. But then in Spain, tragedy struck. Caroline was hit by a police car driving at top speed, and suffered traumatic brain injury, lapsing into a coma. 

Through the painful hospital stay and the process of rehabilitation, with the added challenge of being stuck in a foreign country with minimal support from the authorities, the challenges imposed by Covid, and betrayal by the man she loved the most, Caroline’s mother stands by her side. 

  

As readers, we are swept along on the budding romance. The first hint of trouble comes at the 18 percent mark when we have brought into the young love story. 

  

The writing is mostly accessible and easy, but also scintillating at places. 

Here’s the authors’ description of coma: 

A coma has two rooms. 

The first is a padded cell in the belly of oblivion. 

A dungeon of eternal night for the mind’s eye… 

  

The second room is far stranger. 

A place of hunger and shadows. 

The walls are porous, and every perforation is a tiny mouth, feeding on fragments of light and noise, sensitive to scent and touch. 

Your ancient animal self is chained here, snarling, weeping, vomiting incoherent commands to your body. 

Shrieking with pain. 

  

I also enjoyed the observations about cities, people and feelings: 

Porto Alegre: home to epic book fairs, rebellions and ghost stories 

Sydney is a city of white teeth and suntanned legs. 

Australian egalitarianism is found in a frosted glass. 

Caroline herself as A ravenous young woman of the world ordering one of everything on the menu. 

The holiday season in Australia is A little like Carnaval in Brazil but slightly less public nudity, and almost no one has rhythm. 

  

The cover, depicting a woman’s profile displayed in multiple shards of broken glass, gives us a hint of a life shattered, but also a life painstakingly being put together again. 

 

 (I read this book on NetGalley. Thank you to the author, the publisher and NetGalley.) 

Book Review: SOVEREIGN



Title: Sovereign (Part I of the Sovereign Trilogy)

Author: AJ Whitney

Publisher: Blue Handle Publishing

Pages: 177

My GoodReads Rating: ⭐⭐

 

Ten Orphan children, named 331 to 340, have been selected for the decennial Sending, a ritual in which the children are offered to the Sovereign, the reigning deity, in the woods, in exchange for a bountiful harvest for ten years for an unnamed settler/survivor community. Raised in the Orphan Home, the children await the festival.

332, the protagonist, and her best friend, 333, are looking forward to the Sending, until something they overhear leads them to realise that their position isn’t quite as privileged as they imagine it to be.

 

The Prologue opens in the past tense, in the third person limited PoV of an unnamed grey-haired woman. It might as well have been Chapter 1, since this PoV alternates with the 1st person, present tense PoV of the main character, in every other chapter throughout the novel.

When we first meet the protagonist, whose gender we are unaware of yet, we get the distinct impression that they are running for their life. While we learn later that this is only a game, it does contrast nicely with later events when the game becomes all too real and dangerous.

The description, though minimal, helps evoke the setting to some extent, but large parts still happen in a vacuum. We know nothing about the place or time, or what kind of an economy this is. There’s no timeline to the events, nor any reference to whether this is Planet Earth or a different world. They are the only community alive for miles, so we get no idea about what happened to the rest of the world.

The writing could have been tighter. Early on, I got a sense of a society where everything seems perfect on the surface, but the details that could have fleshed out that impression, details that could have helped us imagine this dystopian and distinctly non-industrial world, were missing.

One of the unnamed characters used to be a baseball coach, we are told, which sounds very bizarre and modern in this Amish-type of world. The grey-haired woman says she misses air conditioning but there is no mention of what happened in this world, why there is no air conditioning, no electric appliances?  What changed to make the world this way? We should have been given some hint at that point.

 

The pace is slow, especially in the present. There was definitely more tension in the grey-haired lady’s 3rd person account.

 

As a Main Character, 332 didn’t have as much spirit as she thought she had (Incidentally, Harper, the name that 332 takes after she is adopted, is an odd unisex name in an otherwise traditional community). That things weren’t right was not something she realized on her own. It is others trying to fight the system that gets her attention. Also, the manner in which she figures things out is not satisfying. The tension, if any, is subdued.

There is no inciting incident that happens to her. Nor is she forced into a situation where she must act or something dire will happen.

The 1st person account came across as idyllic. The characterization of the children was weak. Life was altogether too peaceful. Till the 24 percent mark, the children had no clue about their fate. With the core conflict having fizzled out, we plod on in this bucolic world where everything is pleasant.

I understand that the book is for younger readers but not giving agency to the Main Characters weakens the story. Just because a book is meant for middle-grade students is no reason for leaving so many plot holes strewn through.

Also, the discussions on the part of the council are too tame and simplistic. The people agree unanimously that the 10 children should be adopted. Everyone but two are in agreement and those two are easily overruled. At a supposedly critical meeting, the Elders busy themselves relating history lessons to each other for the benefit of the eavesdropping children.

332 hears the truth at the secret meeting for the very first time and yet, afterwards, she is able to repeat the words verbatim despite having heard them only once.

This is one massive and boring ‘tell’ exercise. As though mere talk couldn’t have changed things at any time in the last 300 years. As if revolutions are won by sitting across the table.

There is no information about how the treehouse that 332 and 333 call the Stronghold was built. The girls claim to have built it themselves, but no further information is available to make that claim credible. It’s a room with a trapdoor, walls with windows. Inside there’s a “wobbly old table” and two mismatched chairs in an “eight-foot-square room”. There’s even a large ancient trunk which contains a moth-eaten blanket, a cracked mirror, and a pile of cushions. They could have claimed to have found it, but no, 332 says they built it by themselves.

 

For the most part, we have teenagers talking like philosophers, in a most unreal manner. The dialogue is a boring recounting of what has taken place.

Then suddenly at the 74 percent mark, the tension is upped, without warning. But it is a case of too much too late. After this, the pace picks up with more action trying to compensate for the lack of it earlier.

 

The book ends on a cliffhanger, inviting us to read Book 2 in the series. I don't plan to.


 (I read this book on NetGalley. Thank you to the author, the publisher and NetGalley.) 

Sunday, July 06, 2025

Book Review: THE LAST WIFE



Title: The Last Wife

Author: Matt McGregor

Publisher: Inkubator Books

Pages: 283

My GoodReads Rating: ⭐⭐


Olivia Yates, an artist forced to make a living as a waitress, and stuck in an abusive relationship with boyfriend Damian, is rescued from her pitiable life by Lachlan Gibson, handsome, charming, kind and rich. They fall in love, marry and move to his palatial home. 

Very soon, Olivia realizes that being married to Lachlan isn’t quite as wonderful as she had imagined. For one, Lachlan has all sorts of rules that he expects his wife to follow. He chooses her clothes, insists on her dyeing her hair blonde. What could he possibly mean by this controlling attitude?  

And then there is the manner in which the neighbours seem to treat her, calling her a gold-digger who has seduced him into marrying her. 

As Olivia digs deeper, she discovers the secret he is hiding and wonder what horrible fate is in store for her.  

  

I found Olivia to be extremely naïve. While she is no gold-digger, she does in fact let herself be swayed into making decisions based on her comfort, even though she doesn’t really know Lachlan all that well.  

Olivia fit the character trope very well. Friendless, she latches on to the first person who is nice to her.  

There were a lot of questions left unanswered, even after the conclusion. Why does the neighbour, Sylvia Woodhouse, get so angry on hearing the name, Gibson? What experiences did the little boy next door have with Lachlan’s first wife? 

What was the rationale behind Lachlan wanting what he did? Why did the other antagonist act as they did? The explanation given is wholly unconvincing.  

The climax was packed with action but an understanding of why the characters acted as they did was missing.  

On the whole, the story was predictable. If you’ve read thrillers in this genre, it’s easy to tell which way the story will go. 


 (I read this book on NetGalley. Thank you to the author, the publisher and NetGalley.) 

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