Book Review: ROLLING TOWARD CLEAR SKIES

Title: Rolling Toward Clear Skies

Author: Catherine Ryan Hyde

Publisher: Lake Union Publishing

Pages: 293

My GoodReads Rating: ⭐⭐

Alex, a registered nurse, and Dr Margaret ‘Maggie’ Blount run Doctors on Wheels, along with a doctor couple, John and Lacey Bishop. The four voluntarily head out to areas affected by natural calamities, and offer medical aid to those in need, without charging a cent.

During one such trip to Louisiana, the site of a hurricane, Maggie treats two newly orphaned sisters, 16-year-old Jean and 13-year-old Rose, who are suffering from pneumonia. She finds herself drawn to the two girls and chooses to take them home.

Predictably, Maggie’s daughters, 16-year-old Willa and 13-year-old Gemma aren’t happy. Already in a conflict-ridden relationship with their mother, they lash out at their mother’s decision to foster/adopt the two girls and go off to stay with their father.

Will this group of conflicted individuals ever become a true family?

 

I have read this author’s work before and have found her writing to be engaging. Unfortunately, this was far from her best work. The story lacked depth and I found so many issues that didn’t sit right.

The doctors are supposed to be helping victims of natural disasters. Although the anchor, Eleanor Price, commends their bravery, we never get the sense of them being in any real danger. The book sees them through a hurricane and a wildfire, but the danger is always past by the time they get there.

Even the trauma that Jean and Rose suffer, of which we hear a lot, is not something that we see in the present, not even in a flashback. It’s just something we are told about.

 

The descriptions do nothing to make the scenes come alive. The dialogues were cheesy and banal in some cases, and unreal in others, sounding almost like a counselling psychology textbook. Utterly unlike the way normal people would speak.

I didn’t like any of the characters. Not one. They all came across as fake and flat. Jean and Rose have no flaws. They are just so perfect. On the other hand, there’s no let up to the selfishness of Willa and Gemma, no redeeming qualities whatsoever.

Alex was so passive, he was totally unnecessary. Early on, he tells Maggie that Jean and Rose are his favourites among Maggie’s daughters.

Maggie was so ‘good’, it was unbelievable. Especially with the attempts to set the parents of Jean and Rose as being terribly flawed. The girls talking to Maggie as if she was some great saviour was off-putting.

The anchor, Eleanor, was so brash, I wanted to slap her. I couldn’t imagine why Maggie would choose to invite her to do follow up stories with her family.

The only character who stood out miles above the others was Sunny, the little stray that Rose adopts.

Maggie couldn’t seem to make up her mind about Jean and Rose. She flitted back and forth between calling them fostered and adopted. At one point, she told Eleanor that they had been officially adopted. And then, a few pages later, the word, fostered, was used again.

Maggie’s motivation for adopting or fostering the girls was unclear. Why was she so taken up with them? Naturally, her daughters were upset with their mother.

Speaking of the girls, miffed at their mother’s actions, they go to their dad’s house and return more than ten months later. During that time, there is no mention of school. Presumably, they went to school while at their dad’s house, but there was no mention of school for Jean and Rose during those nine months. No mention of the challenges they might have faced. Not even one sentence to say they even went to school.

Also, during that period, as Maggie informs Eleanor, she doesn’t go to work, apparently to help Jean and Rose to adjust. Adjust to what? Willa and Gemma are away, so there are no challenges. How does Maggie earn a living during that period? How does she sustain her lifestyle, including the big house with the swimming pool? She returns to her clinic only at the 88 percent mark in the book. So what does she do during those ten-odd months?

The first chapter, with the interview with Eleanor, is one long and elaborate ‘tell’ exercise. It is boring and the worst way to seek to engage the reader in the lives of the characters.

Maggie does not recognize her own mother just because she has had some work done on her face.

The book has its heart in the right place, the idea that family is irreplaceable and that nothing else matters quite as much, but it takes too long, and the most circuitous route, to establish that. Not exactly an engaging story.

Of course, there is a happy ending, but though the characters’ emotions are wrung through, I was just glad it was over.

 

(I read this book on NetGalley. Thank you to the author, the publisher and NetGalley.)